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The Loss
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The Loss |
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AnthonyEV1 Junior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 17St. Charles, IL, USA |
The Loss Written By Anthony Verzi 4/18/00 Why did I do this? How could I of been so dumb? When deep down inside... I knew That you are the one But now I've lost you Because I was afriad Afraid of getting hurt Afraid of someone knowing The true me You loved me... And I loved you... But I was too much of a fool To see That you were the best thing That ever happened to me But now you'll move on And I will stay Stay here loving you All that my heart My brain My soul Can love Till the day That I perish... But I swear to you That my last thoughts Will be of you< !signature--> Just can't live that negative way...make way for the positive day"-Bob Marley. "When the rain falls, it doesnt just fall on one man"-Bob Marley. "" - Bob Marley [This message has been edited by AnthonyEV1 (edited 05-05-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
We all make mistakes in life, it's part of being human. Just be sure and learn from your mistakes. This pain will slowly fade away, but alas it will go . All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I enjoyed this, and also know this kind of pain and mistake very well.  If this is your life right now, I hope it gets better.Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a good poem, but so sad. I hope things get better for you! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Tia Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 41massachusetts |
i know how you feel. i did the same thing.it was a very good poem...Bob Marley is awesome... Tia I'd rather have someone hate me for who i am,than to have someone like me for who i'm pretending to be |
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AnthonyEV1 Junior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 17St. Charles, IL, USA |
Hey everyone, thanks for your replies and just so you know I am doing a lot better now. |
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