»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #7
»
Kim
| Open Poetry #7 |
|
Kim |
|
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
|
Kim I remember going a little aflame, Trying to think of my first daughters name. A magical name to set her apart. A name that would come straight from my heart. One that when sounded and softly heard, Would echo like the call of a bird. No matter whose lip or why or whim, My heart skips a beat each time I hear Kim. It came from inside a part of a goal, It came from inside a part of my soul. It came from the magic of a wishing well. It came from inside my hearts woven spell. Each time it is called and I hear its sound, My eyes light up and heart starts to pound. It echoes like magic sets her apart And gives me a twinge straight in my heart. A flower is a flower, a name a name, But the sound of Kim ever strikes me a flame. |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Of course this is a precious name...Kim was a gift, straight from Him! Well done, Sy! |
||
|
Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
ST, this is really a joyful read. The sound of a daughters name is always the sweetest music to a Father's ear. Very nice poem~~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy, this is precious and so full of love. Thank you for sharing it. |
||
|
Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Seymour, this poem speaks eloquently of your love for her, regardless of her name. Bless you. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, And well said Sunshine. *L* Danny, You are so right, thank you. Martie, Thank you for the read and comment. *L* Meadow, Sweet comment, thank you claire. *L* |
||
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ How tender this is. What adoration from dad. I smile just knowing you smile at the beauty of her name. Next month my son, David, will marry his Kim, and a delight she is in our lives. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It came from inside a part of a goal, It came from inside a part of my soul. It came from the magic of a wishing well. It came from inside my hearts woven spell. Each time it is called and I hear its sound, My eyes light up and heart starts to pound. It echoes like magic sets her apart And gives me a twinge straight in my heart. -------------- you just need to be kissed for this one... your adorable when your writing adoration. this is so perfect!! take care, jm |
||
|
DiObear Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 66Switzerland |
Such a beautiful poem. I'm sure your Kim would agree. |
||
|
tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sy~ Such a lovely poem for such a lovely name and I'm sure she is as lovely as her dad  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are a love, thank you for the sweet comment. *L* Janet, And you are adorable with your comments. *L* DiObear, She does and I thank you. Tracie, Lovelier and I thank you. *L* |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
