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I dreamt of you last night
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I dreamt of you last night |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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I dreamt of you last night it was nice to see your face without having to fight through the confines of this place I still can see your smile I cant hide the hints of mine still knowing all the while that my dreams I’ve left behind. I know we’ll never be sometimes things just work that way you mean everything to me and my love grows with the day You may keep your love for him but your smile stays with my heart the light it shines will never dim its glowed within me from the start |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Kevin, there is nothing more painful then loving one who does not love you any longer. Or perhaps never did. Very well written. Marina |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Kevin, Very well written. I, too, know what it is liketo love someone who loves someone else. Very nice way to let your feelings out. Thank you for sharing! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Nice poem with flow of true emotions. I liked this one, particularly the lines ... but your smile stays with my heart the light it shines will never dim its glowed within me from the start Keep Writing, Regards, sudhir. In any moment of decision, The best thing you can do is the right thing, The next-best thing is the wrong thing, And the worst thing you can do is nothing. - Theodore Roosevelt |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
Kev, This is so beautiful! =-) Wow, i think we all know how you feel in this situation, you expressed it really well ... She's a lucky girl. =-) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kevin~ This is lovely with a touch of sadness. 'I still can see your smile I can't hide the hints of mine' A beautiful line, sweetie. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Kevin - this is lovely - written with sadness - but still lovely  I hope your sadness won't last too long Roniece |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
marge, good to see ya =) shan, still cant do it =( everyone else thanks, i hope it wasnt to identifiable, keep smiling |
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Tia Junior Member
since 2000-05-05
Posts 41massachusetts |
that was a very nice poem.i know what it is like to feel like that.good luck in the future... Tia |
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