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*~Juliet~* Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 19Key West |
 You are my love, You are my life, Always there, Through all my strife. You make me laugh, You make me smile, Even if we only talk, For a little while. I want to be with you, Until the end, From dusk 'till dawn, Again & again. Please reassure me, I'll always be yours, Whatever it takes, My love, my amor. * |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I LIKE THE POEM VERY MUCH.ENJOYED THIS POEM.!!!!!!  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A sweet declaration of love! Nice poem..  |
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Tuck Junior Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 27 |
very boss poem, juliet! |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Your name captured my attention and then your poetry stole a few beats from my heart... once again.. someone is very lucky. =) Thanks for teh read. "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is excellent Juliet. . . welcome to Passions. . . your muse speaks loudly through your pen. . . thank you for letting us hear. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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*~Juliet~* Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 19Key West |
Tnx for the compliment, Vandana, Poet deVine, & Tuck! How sweet, White Nite, thank you so much!!!! Tnx, Sven...I'll be trying to post more later! =) Btw- If anyone wants to contact me, my email is: [email protected] |
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Zelda Junior Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 43NOVA |
Simple and sweet this is. Enjoyed! Z |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
--Juliet This was beautiful hon...full of sweet love and joy. i think spring fever is really catching and heating up the passions forum as of late. at any rate, i enjoyed reading this very much. take care and best wishes. amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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