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Tuck
Junior Member

since 2000-04-29

Posts 27

0 posted 2000-05-04 08:31 AM

(I did not write this poem- someone wrote it for me and i fell in love with it...i hope you enjoy)

you are far
when i could have been your star
you listened to people
who scared you to death, and from my heart,
strange that you were strong enough
to even make a start
but you'll never find
peace of mind
till you listen to your heart

people
you can never change the way they feel
better let them do just what they will
for they will,
if you let them,
steal your heart from you
peoplewill always make a lover feel a fool
but you knew i loved you,
we could have shown them all
we should have seen love through

and people
will always make a lover feel a fool,
but you knew i loved you
we could have shown them all

but remember this,
every other kiss
that you ever give,
long as we both live,
when you need the hand of another man,
one you can really surreneder with,
i will wait for you,
like i always do,
there's something there
that can't compare with any other-

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

1 posted 2000-05-04 09:00 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS. I see that you have good taste when you say that you love this poem, it is very expresive and really touching . When are we going to see more ?
Thanks for brightening my day .

With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2000-05-05 09:01 AM

Hi Tuck,

This is a lovely poem thank you for sharing it, When can we all see something from your heart? We are all a friendly bunch here at passions I think you will like it here.

Welcome,

Cerenity

Jeffrey Carter

Member Elite

since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

3 posted 2000-05-05 02:14 PM

Welcome to passion's .....I think you're gonna like it here.

All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2000-05-05 04:33 PM

Welcome to passions and thanks for sharing that poem with us! I see why you liked it!

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2000-05-05 09:51 PM

Welcome to Passions! Thank you for sharing the poem.....it was beautiful!!

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Zelda
Junior Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 43
NOVA

6 posted 2000-05-05 11:10 PM

Thank you for sharing this--the thoughts are lovely.
I know the feelings expressed very well...for me there is only one, and I will wait forever for him.
Welcome!
Z

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