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eyesplus2
Member

since 2000-03-02

Posts 163
australia

0 posted 2000-05-04 03:55 AM

       Two shall become one
                                                                you and I shall become us
                                                                                 apart we are strong
                                                                                                   yet weak
                                                                                                       yet together
                                                                                                             we are weak
                                                                                                                   yet very strong
                                                                                                                              indivsible
                                                                                                                                a union of two hearts
                                                                                                                                                     two souls
                                                                                                                                                           two past
                                                                                                                                                              one today
                                                                                                                                                               and one tomorrow
                                                                                                                                                                    Two shall become



[This message has been edited by eyesplus2 (edited 05-04-2000).]

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2000-05-04 04:46 AM

Interesting format! I also like the way you used the words.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2000-05-04 05:18 AM

Eyes~
very interesting both in description and format, yet I felt drawn in by this.
WONDERFUL

Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

3 posted 2000-05-05 08:38 AM

Hi eyeplus2,

Its neet how your wonderful feelings run wild on the the page you have control yet not,
strong yet weak, apart then together
I like this much.

Cerenity

[This message has been edited by Cerenity-1 (edited 05-05-2000).]

mete out
Member

since 2000-02-16

Posts 270
england

4 posted 2000-05-05 08:44 AM

***eyesplus2
i really like the flow of your work.
i like the feeling of being carried of with it.
great, as usual.

I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

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