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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Will YOU teach ME how to speak in the lovers' language Will YOU teach ME how to make love Will YOU believe ME if I say you're the only one Will YOU forgive ME if I had lied to you once and only once and confessed immediately Will YOU see ME as person without any ego or false pretence Will YOU trust ME if I say we'll be together in the beautiful journey called life Will YOU love ME with my imperfections Will you ? ................................................. For I love you so much and I can't express it and everytime after speaking with you, my friend, I end up feeling I should have spoken more. ................................................. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I WILL!!! I think you've said it all in this one. We all ask these questions at some point in life. Beautiful words. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Thanks Jeffrey! I'll say it to my friend someday soon. Sincerely A_L |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
and before its too late!! yuh nice poem |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Never let a chance slip by to tell someone how you feel...do it now!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I must agree with general consensus---GO FOR IT---mail this...and if you FEEL like you should speak more--SPEAK MORE... Sorry--got carried away...We seem to be suffering from similar symptoms--I, on the other hand, can't seem to shut up... |
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