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The Light
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The Light |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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*note to my family at passions* < !signature-->~i had been having writer's block, but I found some new inspiration! The Light By: Amy M. Kennedy Sitting here wondering what is the meaning of my life feeling the world closing in around me Then out of the darkness, there appeared a light that swept me up so bright it was hard to see The most beautiful face my eyes have ever laid upon graced my sight You chased away my fears and tears away went the ugly cold of the night Once again I could breath the dark no longer holding me its prisoner...but set me free With a few words from you, my life changed, and I again found me My heart now dares again to love and to hope and to dream Wanting to hold you close underneath the sun, the stars, a moonbeam But alas the distance for now seperates us, but doesn't change the intensity of what we feel Sweet eternal bliss this is so true and real I won't allow doubt to creep in or to ruin this perfect moment in time And if this is wrong then caring for you has been my only crime Would serve my sentence knowing you are in my heart and that what we have is true So here I sit, counting the days till I can be with you ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 05-03-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ooohhhhhh now ya got me soooo curious... hhhhmmmmm I just love a mystery... this is so well written amy-girl... lots to think about here... strong emotional images... most intriguing... E-mail me with the dish LOL later amy-gator, loves ya,jm |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
LOL  ok i will do. thanks for your reply as always jan.love ya amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Amy, I am glad you have found the inspiration needed to end your block!! I hope you have much happiness in the up-coming days! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow...when you find inspiration, you get it in bunches!! This is great!  |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Amy, Nice to know I am an inspiration to someone...huh?....this wasn't about me?...oh well, I still like it....lol All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Beautiful poem! I look forward to reading more in the future. "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Amy, you can always find something to write about. You, my dear have the talent to do just that. Marina |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Thank you all for your sweet replies! I love you guys bunches. each of you is one of the reasons why i continue to love writing. take care, amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Amy, Oh happy I am to see you beeming in the light my friend, wonderful poem here, enjoyed it much. Cerenity |
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