Open Poetry #7 |
Alone |
daft Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 16 |
Waiting to be next to you To see you everyday To hear your voice And feel your touch Thinking about it makes me cry But as I looked into your eyes They were blank Your voice was harsh And your touch was cold Then it happened You left me Alone Wondering why But gaining no answers Trying to put it all behind me Slowly, I'm getting over you Until the next time That I hear your voice Drifting through my head Your touch on my skin The smile on your face And the look in your eyes I'm still here alone With the thought of you Always pondering in my head Alone |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad yet well written, beautiful poem. Denise |
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PericolosoAmore Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 31 |
Great poem. 'Good things come to those who wait' GUINESS BEER ADVERT. I learned that the hard way. nicely done I liked it a lot. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Hi, Know this: memories make us stronger and I too know the pain of a memory coming back to haunt All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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