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Spring They Say
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Spring They Say |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Spring They Say Spring they say yet still the trace of winter's frosty morning cold. I bury myself naked beneath the comfort of your warm welcome shoulder. This sheltering love is against everything I believe in, yet I would not break free even if I could. Colored bottles along the windowsill cast rainbows of hope on our bedroom wall. Spring they say, yet divided from winter only by a date on the calendar. [This message has been edited by Beki (edited 05-02-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Beki, spring they say is always looked forward to, but summer is what I desire. Great poem, really enjoyed Parker |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thank you Parker  My own personal favorite season is fall but I love the spring too. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Beki! Denise |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thank you Denise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very nice, Beki - I've got to say that spring is the best for me - I love all that fresh new green life everywhere - and having summer to look forward to... |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
That's what I love about Spring too...green is my favorite color Thanks for reading Nan |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Beki, I could feel the emotion in this piece. Makes me want to crawl back in bed with the love of my life. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Warm beach days are coming....according to the calendar. Even those cool, chilly mornings walking on the beach can be exhilarating! Nice poem Beki~~~ |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
I love beach spring and fall beach weather more than any other, Danny, that's why I live here! Summer means tourists mucking up my beach so I amnot a huge fan, but spring mornings and evenings walking by the sea are the best! As is fall....weather much the same both times, cool ams and evenings with awesome breezes , warm days...wonderful! Thanks for reading, my friend |
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A.C.Turner Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 83Reading, Pa.Home of Bardfest |
Great work. I love the flow. Winter is my favorite although I love spring because the earth reawakens from dormancy. Thanks. ACT. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thank you for reading, AC |
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