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Open Poetry #7

Dreams

eyesplus2
Member

since 2000-03-02

Posts 163
australia

0 posted 2000-05-02 04:08 AM

Hearts full of wishes

Wishes full of Hearts

   I have given my wishes to you

       you have held them tight to your heart

             my dreams lifted your hopes

               Your hopes gave me dreams to wish for

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-05-02 04:17 AM

This is nice, liked the levels--each a step connected to the other---very effective...thanks.

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2000-05-03 09:09 PM

Hi eyeplus2,

This is wonderful I like how they all connect to one another, I really enjoyed.
I don't think I properly welcomed you to passions, so I am now and I hope to see more of your work.

Cerenity

Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

3 posted 2000-05-03 10:19 PM

Lovely poem. Liked the format too! "Your hopes gave me dreams to wish Beautiful line
for"Beautiful line
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"Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*

[This message has been edited by Dawn Eclipse (edited 05-03-2000).]

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