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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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Rusty Well chit I must admit I’m truly rusty haven't penned a line for so long a while now I see I’ve written crusty I just hope it pours somewhere out of me and while unorthodox yet hope I you can sort some thing out of it *smile* you haven't lost your touch in such a while go with your suspicions bleus you will find it’s worth ambushes to be hopeful with bright intentions a return from pain unto promise love searching for some itchy quenched lantern light while warmed by yon ragged fire a blazing isn’t it so wonderfully amenable you haven’t blood to death. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Lucky - I had to read your poem thru twice but at the end of it I have to say it is good writing - very good! Thank you for sharing it....  Roniece |
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Jamie Dawg Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 35 |
Wow..I have to say a little complex for this ol dawg at first, but well worth a deeper look! Thank you! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Roniece, Thank you so much for the RE: I didn't really think it would mean anything to anyone. Jamie, I have to say if you thought this complex chances are your quite complex also; maybe looking to deep... This is a nice reply... I'm honored.< !signature--> [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 04-27-2000).] |
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kaleidoscope Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 38 |
I like the images in the lines "quenched lantern light while warmed by yon ragged fire a blazing". But there seems to be an underlying meaning in this poem that I am missing, somehow. |
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