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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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sweet songs fill the air lift your spirt listen close you can hear the laughter ring you smile as you watch song reflects in your eyes dancing about as if in a trance of their own you watch the laughter in their eyes as well put everything aside listen to the voices ring out like a silver bell flood through your soul lost to words lost to senses lost to everything lay back listen alone tranquil a distant smile songs wrap around you close songs end till another day come back then leave until eternity Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before-Edgar Allen Poe |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I like this one as well, though it doesn't flow as well as some of your others. I didn't find myself tripping over any lines though, and it may be it was meant to read this way as the subject matter is "song", which of course has flow in it's lack thereof. Okay, does that even make sense? :-) |
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