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A Vision

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2002-07-21 12:30 PM

A sweet voice echos
By the tranquil water
A small silvery rain drop
Falls in, feeding the pond

The voice, so strong and willing
Rings out, so soft
Carried out over the water
By the gentle blow of the wind

Suddenly a face appears in the lake
I remember it like it happened yesterday
You told me you loved me over and over
And I know you ment it

Then a soft splash of water comes over me
I wake up, only a dream
But in my heart it is still going
Over and over so true

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

1 posted 2002-07-21 02:06 PM

Riley: Sometimes dreams do come true. Nice poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

2 posted 2002-07-21 02:11 PM

Yes, I know, but in my case that sort of relates to this poem, my dream was squashed by the guy. So sometimes the do and then they don't. You can only have faith.

~*Riley*~

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2002-07-21 10:22 PM

Dear Riley, There will be another fish in the sea or as you expressed it, face in the water. Good writing. Love, Joyce

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