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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2002-06-30 01:33 PM

When the lights go out,
When all there is empty space,
I hear time pass me by with the soccer.

Here we once had cries,
Here we once had tears,
In this field we had loss and win.

We were once glamorous,
We were once disappointed,
All will pass...but our friendship...stay.

Of all things we've learned,
Of all challenges we went through,
Teamwork is the most valuable lesson.

No matter where we are heading,
Through life after this game,
We will have no regrets.

When the lights go out,
When all there is empty space,
I walk alone on this green pasture.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2002-06-30 08:29 PM

Oh Eliza dear, you have such a sweet way with words. Joyce

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

2 posted 2002-07-01 10:44 PM

quote:
When the lights go out,
When all there is empty space,
I walk alone on this green pasture.

I really like this part, it resonates within the soul...at the end we are all alone.

IHOPoets, your Poetic Home

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

3 posted 2002-07-02 01:52 PM

Reminds me of the just ended World Cup!

I like this:

No matter where we are heading,
Through life after this game,
We will have no regrets.

This is so pretty, Eliza

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

4 posted 2002-07-02 02:33 PM

thanks! Too bad the German didn't win. I was on their side.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2002-07-02 08:33 PM

Eliza~

'We were once glamorous,
We were once disappointed,
All will pass...but our friendship...stay.'

I believe that the true winners of the game are the ones who cherish the cup of friendship~

A lovely write, dear~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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