Looking in the crowd - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Corner Pub #2

Looking in the crowd

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-05-29 12:01 PM

when the eyes meet,
the roads are created,
a law of humanity is violated,
the eyebrows serve as sentential,
guarding the precious gems from discomfort,
the doors bang shut,
creating a solitude of hope.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

1 posted 2001-05-29 04:55 PM

aw those moments when two strangers eyes meet and one puts up their defenses sad very sad.

well observed and well written. enjoyed and can relate on both accounts

"you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2001-05-29 08:45 PM

Brian I am glad you were able to get the meaning.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

Red_Feather
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

3 posted 2001-05-29 11:01 PM

A law of all species i think...the eyes reveal, they project, they are indeed the windows ( or doors ) to the soul. I felt the intensity of those moments in this one, well written, much enjoyed.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

4 posted 2001-05-30 12:12 PM

if we know all this, then we should not shy away from looking someone in the eyes.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.