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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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it’s raining again there’s a storm a brewing thunder and lightning are dancing electric humidity in the air clock battery ran down disabled hand just twitching struggling to do it’s job afternoon almost shadows hide the room with gray rainy day type of comfort old red dog growling hunching his back on hardwood unbridled pleasure exhibited wet sounds from open door car is sailing up the hill water indifferent closes behind semi-stray cat on the porch accuses me of the wetting silly cat, i am not God there is a storm a brewing thunder and lightning duet clean freshness in the air ~~~~~~~~  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ VERY nice ! Loved this .... 'clock battery ran down disabled hand just twitching struggling to do it’s job' *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Tramp Poet: Sometimes rain is welcome and seems like a blessing. we've had so much of it this spring, I am having touble thinking of it that way! I enjoyed your poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I always enjoy your poetry Tramp Poet. I was amused by your reference to the cat. I know the feeling. They hold us responsible for every evil and give us no credit for the good things we do for them. Joyce |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
lol thanks y'all for the read and input! was one of those "special" moments... ~~~~~~ |
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