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The Painting - A Poem in Haiku |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Colors of anger A masterpiece created Paint with angry strokes Shades of gray, black, red The story of a man's life Tells of great sorrow With unrestrained strength Measureless beauty appears His story unfolds The anger now gone His true soul shows a garden Masterpiece finished When life gives you a rainy day... |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
So very well done. Joyce |
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laryalee2 Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 96British Columbia, Canada |
A tumultuous journey, with a wonderful conclusion... well done, indeed! Lary |
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Anonymity Junior Member
since 2002-06-11
Posts 45 |
A transitional story well told, It's ironic how the transitions in life though hardly seen are their own works of art. Enjoyed the poetry. [This message has been edited by Anonymity (06-11-2002 03:05 PM).] |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
thanks everyone. I'm glad ya'll liked it! When life gives you a rainy day... |
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