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sweetcollege_girl
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0 posted 2002-06-05 03:40 PM



Colors of anger
A masterpiece created
Paint with angry strokes

Shades of gray, black, red
The story of a man's life
Tells of great sorrow

With unrestrained strength
Measureless beauty appears
His story unfolds

The anger now gone
His true soul shows a garden
Masterpiece finished

When life gives you a rainy day...

Play in the puddles!!!

© Copyright 2002 Lavada Miller - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-05 07:22 PM


So very well done.  Joyce
laryalee2
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2 posted 2002-06-07 06:31 PM


A tumultuous journey, with a wonderful conclusion...
well done, indeed!
Lary


Anonymity
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3 posted 2002-06-11 03:05 PM


A transitional story well told, It's ironic how the transitions in life though hardly seen are their own works of art.  Enjoyed the poetry.

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sweetcollege_girl
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4 posted 2004-06-09 10:45 AM


thanks everyone. I'm glad ya'll liked it!

When life gives you a rainy day...

Play in the puddles!!!

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