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Field of Dreams |
pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Peering through the morning mist a thin curtain of translucent blue that surrounds like a moist coccoon creating surreal images in pastel undulating, shifting, floating they call with silent voices beckoning, arms open wide drawing the subconscious deeper a shimmering field of green and gold in a world bereft of pain or trial, or lonely despair only the warmth remains; the calm; the soul rejoices, triumphant in this sweet field of dreams the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
What a lovely place you have found Pegasus. In your dream dreams. Joyce [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (06-05-2002 01:30 AM).] |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
If only we could capture the peace in real time. Thanks, Melton [consciousness: That annoying time between naps] |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
pegasus111: This is captivating! If only we could find the bridge! Betty Lou Hebert |
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laryalee2 Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 96British Columbia, Canada |
I just sigh at this one, Pegasus... such an idyllic place -- a wonderful experience, to be able to drift off to your field of dreams... Lary |
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Anonymity Junior Member
since 2002-06-11
Posts 45 |
To create a place and allow us to enter your 'Field of Dreams' is a wonderful experience. Excellent imagry you used with this poem. I look forward to reading more. |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
...impatiently standing in line to get my ticket for this wonderous place ah, if only there was such a place...this dream land of yours. Thanks for the trip into your mind. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Ah, "perchance to dream"...I love the way you penned this and those dreams do have a way of taking the edge off of reality..lovely, Peg. A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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