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laryalee2 Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 96British Columbia, Canada |
The years have worn his features thin; he's hunched upon the weathered bench, ignoring winds and sea-lashed spray. A chill begins to glaze his bones. His frail-edged thoughts retreat to days when children's laughter pebbled through warm-scented pathways of his life. A trembling sigh escapes his lips. He drained their love to fuel his climb; he strode across chrome-powered peaks on shreds of crayoned Daddy-hugs and all the moments in between. He knows the final tally's taken, hears the tread of vacancy. He sees a solemn finger beckon past the furthest shade of grey. 04/15/02 Laryalee Fraser (I tried to return a while ago - could not remember my password, and could not get a new one because my email no longer existed. And for a while they weren't accepting new members.) [This message has been edited by laryalee2 (05-22-2002 06:29 PM).] |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Lary: Well I am certainly glad you got through and were able to post this wonderful poem today! It's outstanding! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
this is very well written and full of emotion. Welcome here and glad you got through. I like your poem very much. Joyce |
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leafseranade Member
since 2001-07-06
Posts 118Wisconsin, USA |
very good writing! I love the images...everything's right there if you just turn a switch...the light def. comes on in your mind in this piece. awesome job! |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Lary my long lost friend! So good to see you here again, and with such a powerful piece too! welcome back dear. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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laryalee2 Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 96British Columbia, Canada |
Hi Betty Lou! Thank you -- it's nice to be back and see so many familiar names still here! Hi Joyce...thank you! leafseranade...(hmm, can I shorten your name?) Thanks for a great comment! Pegasus, I've missed you...glad you like it! (And thanks for making contact with me!)  Lary |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LaryALee~ So very nice to see you back with us~ 'He drained their love to fuel his climb; he strode across chrome-powered peaks on shreds of crayoned Daddy-hugs and all the moments in between.' Such a beautiful and emotionally poignant piece~ **If you ever have any questions or problems, just write to Ron (site owner) at [email protected] and he will help you in anyway he can. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
laryalee, welcome back, a great come back post...more? IHOPoets, bringing poetic scribes together-- |
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laryalee2 Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 96British Columbia, Canada |
Hi Marge! It's great to see you again! Thank you for your heartwarming thoughts! Thanks, wordancer...so glad you enjoyed it! Lary |
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