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My First Tanka...Roses
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My First Tanka...Roses |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
The rose's beauty Should tell us the answer why Their stems wear sharp thorns Beauty demands protection Beauty lives in dangers way [This message has been edited by Songbird (edited 05-11-2001).] |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Very well done! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is true. How clever. Joyce |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A lot of truth within this tanka....I thought you did quite well on it. Hope to see more.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
great tanka...with wisdom added! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SongBird~ So very well done - Congrats on the first !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
A very nice Tanka. I really enjoyed the beauty of it. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
good effort....reminds me of when i was a child and wondered why such a beautiful thing like a rose is "spoiled" by the presence of the thorns...  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Nicely done! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
a refreshing look at roses...I so enjoyed this Kathleen Blake |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Roses have beauty aesthetic pleasure to eyes but also have thorns sweet the fragrant rose is not without defenses thorns bring home this point Your First Tanka is a job well done,Dennis |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Come home little Songbird ... come home~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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