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Green Vistas |
Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Green Vistas The children run beneath a sky That's filled with puffy clouds and I Following at a slower pace, Enjoy the sunlight on my face. The winter has been hard and long, But now we hear the robin's song And climb a hill so we can see Green vistas stretching endlessly Away from us and here the breeze Brings scent of flowers; buzz of bees. I watch the children as they range. I'm thinking of the way things change. Remembering another day, When I too was a child at play. Was I exuberant as these And did I laugh as loud and tease? In looking back, I can't recall That I had this much fun, at all! Betty Lou Hebert Published by Children's Advocacy 2001 [This message has been edited by Trillium (04-04-2002 03:34 PM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh I hope you did have this much fun Betty. But maybe you are having it now. Love, Joyce |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
human nature is funny. we always seem to think other people are having more fun than we are. ( I know they are! ) as usual your rhyme flows in near flawless rhythm. I'm jealous... |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Following at a slower pace I love walking with the grandkids. It is wonderful to watch them run and play. Thanks, Melton |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Lovely, lovely poem! I knew when I read the title I was going to enjoy this. Nice imagery, that brings to mind memories of carefree playing. We need to become like children again and enjoy the simple, but beautiful things that surround us. Deb |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Fantastic, Betty Lou! This brought back some real good memories! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Joyce: My childhood was pretty lacking in fun, but I am making up for it in our youngest son and grandchildren. Thanks. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
pegasus111: Thanks for your nice remarks about the flow of the poem. I enjoy your comments. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
2dalimit: It is fun being with children and being allowed into their world for awhile. Keeps us young! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Deb: You are so right. It's the simple things that usually give us the greatest pleasure. Thanks. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Denise: Thanks and glad this gave you some happy memories. Betty Lou Hebert |
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