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Corner Pub #2

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quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

0 posted 2002-04-02 12:25 PM

i'm slowly venturing more and more into 'the pub'.

i guess i'm just tiring of teen #5 and would honestly love to know the opinions of more mature writers. not to belittle anyone over there or to sound overly harsh. here, i'll stop before i put my foot any further into that enormous mouth of mine.

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Ageless smiles
wither away
into the
cold, crisp
dirty winter -
as
once again I shroud
my Infidelity
in YOUr open arms.

/gwen/

so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2002-04-02 02:09 AM

Welcome to our corner and I hope we can be of help to you. Your poem is stark and pithy. Joyce

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-04-02 10:15 PM

Gwen~
It's nice to have you stretch your poetic prowess ...

I find this to be a noteable piece of budding talent~
I hope you'll enjoy sharing more~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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