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In a Windy Night

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2002-03-23 07:57 AM

South air softly passes my ears,
blowing off my scarf.
My hair looses in a blink,
leaning against my lips.
My hands, warming in the gloves,
muture my ears in shelter.

Cold air hides betweeen my thighs
which stumble like an armchair.
My trousers like silken sheet
of blanket admit wind cool to my skin.
My feet, frozening in the sonw,
refresh in hot spring of the Lord.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2002-03-23 12:20 PM

Very descriptive of the leaning into the wind. Joyce

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

2 posted 2002-03-24 06:43 AM

beautifully written and so descriptive!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2002-03-24 06:29 PM

aries_luv_ppl: I've been in wids like this and you've described it perfectly. Good job.

Betty Lou Hebert

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