First Waltz Of Spring - Haiku

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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2002-03-16 06:14 AM

Softly she appears
in her gossamer white gown
Butterflies Spring Waltz

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2002-03-16 01:09 PM

Lovely phrases. Joyce

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2002-03-16 05:41 PM

ellie: Such a lovely picture. I hope you really are seeing butteflies where you live.
The only white, fluttering things here are snowflakes!

Betty Lou Hebert

Greeneyes617
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since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

3 posted 2002-03-16 11:31 PM

Nice read. Haiku's are one of my favorite types of poetry.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2002-03-17 08:44 PM

I love this! especially the last line

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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