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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Sinking mud like a meat sauce whirlpool of spagetti, sucks us into the hot pot of lava, losing our sense in suffocation. We yell in pain, pain of our heart. Nobody knows our suffering, or understand the hidden truths. The mud is dragging our boots, as we try to get up. Each step we press, we fall even deeper into the mud. And the heat from below is burning our flesh away. We die this way to build a pile of muddy corpses, or have we made a tasty soup for our General? //Thoughts after I read All Quiet on the Western Front. You all read it? Eliza Simmons |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh Honey. This gives me goosebumps. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Aries: I have read "All Quiet on the Western Front" and this is a very imaginative piece you have written. Betty Lou Hebert |
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