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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2002-01-24 08:18 PM

Softly, softly,
snow flakes fall.
Fluttering,
their lacy flight to earth.
Softly, softly,
a fluttering,
one can only wish
twer Spring,
and butterflies
softly,
heralding sweet Spring.

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2002-01-24 08:24 PM

I wish it all the time, Ellie! Come on Spring! Lovely flutterings!

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

2 posted 2002-01-24 10:38 PM

We butterfly icons really dig this piece!!!! What wonderful memories this conjures. Nicely done.

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2002-01-25 02:03 AM

This is so sweet/ Joyce

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

4 posted 2002-01-25 04:46 AM

hmmm..softly fluttering snow flakes don't sound half bad..it's the other kind that chased me to Florida..spring is already here ..

very gentle little piece Ellie

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

5 posted 2002-01-25 12:47 PM

Snowflakes turning to butterflies....a very nice picture drawn here.

Mike

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2002-01-26 07:43 PM

This is so delicate and wonderful!

This is a keeper.

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

7 posted 2002-01-29 06:35 PM

Should I ever see another snowflake fall, I shall always think of fluttering butterflies.
Lovely poem... as always.

Hugs,
Deb

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2002-02-04 09:58 PM

Ellie~
You write the flutter so delicately~
This is lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

9 posted 2002-02-05 12:37 PM

ellie: If only this were true! Unfortunately the snowflakes I see are stubbornly remaining snowflakes!

Betty Lou Hebert

[This message has been edited by Trillium (02-05-2002 12:38 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2002-02-06 08:53 PM

Ellie, this is so soft and gentle...
I too wish for spring and butterflies!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Jonas
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since 2000-03-03

Posts 796
Oregon

11 posted 2002-02-09 03:39 AM

Beautiful poem...but I must admit, I love winter

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

12 posted 2002-02-11 02:38 PM

It's snowing here as I read this.. and it's beautiful... I can't help but wish for the butterflies right along with you, though...

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