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Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

0 posted 2002-01-21 03:10 PM

Country Moon

Moonlight gilds each village roof.
In the meadow, every hoof,
Where placid cows raise shining eyes
And chew their cuds and here there lies
A polished pond and all the leaves
Are turned to gold upon the trees.

Magic fills the country air.
Moonglow shimmers everywhere.
Over hills and through the valleys,
Runs a road that dips and dallies,
Like a thong of silver leather,
Drawing all the farms together.

Overhead, the country moon
Rises like a freed balloon!

Betty Lou Hebert

Published in Oatmeal & Poetry 1995

[This message has been edited by Trillium (01-21-2002 03:12 PM).]

Solstice Son
Member

since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

1 posted 2002-01-21 04:11 PM

beautiful...simply and perfectly beautiful...

Sol

" and I dream of her always,
even when I don't dream.
her name's on my tongue
and her blood's in my stream."

'Christmas in Prison' John Prine

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

2 posted 2002-01-21 04:15 PM

this is lovely. reminds me of my youth. thank you for sharing.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2002-01-21 05:02 PM

Another nice one, Betty. Joyce

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2002-01-21 10:05 PM

Soltice Son: Thank you so much! I do appreciate your comments.

Betty Lou Hebert

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2002-01-21 10:06 PM

pegasus111: Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2002-01-21 10:08 PM

Thanks Joyce!

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2002-01-22 02:00 AM

BettyLou~
A truly delightful read~

'Over hills and through the valleys,
Runs a road that dips and dallies,
Like a thong of silver leather,
Drawing all the farms together.'

What a creatively unique perspective~
I love it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

8 posted 2002-01-22 11:53 AM

Marge: Delighted to see your comment and thanks for such a nice one!

Betty Lou Hebert

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

9 posted 2002-01-22 02:38 PM

Lovely with much imagery!

Deb

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

10 posted 2002-01-22 07:05 PM

Lovely, Betty Lou!

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

11 posted 2002-01-22 07:39 PM

Deb: Thank you and glad you liked the poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

12 posted 2002-01-22 07:40 PM

Tahnk you Denise!

Betty Lou Hebert

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

13 posted 2002-01-22 07:41 PM

Tahnk you Denise!

Betty Lou Hebert

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