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Perfect Man Senryu

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

0 posted 2001-05-22 07:14 PM

A perfect man is
Someone who listens to you,
Even in the game.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2001-05-22 07:41 PM

Do you know one like that?! Where is he, where is he?!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-05-23 12:06 PM

When you find him, you can forward him to me.
A fun poem. I love the brevity of Haiku and Senryu.

Midnitesun

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-23 12:54 PM

------> Not me <------

Nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

4 posted 2001-05-23 06:24 AM

But can a perfect woman- appreciate such stunning unreality in such a man????
I guess we'll never know on both accounts!

No Better Place do I know
Than where Hearts knit as
one,
For in that grand
experience,
The Better ALL become.

God Bless us All!!!

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

5 posted 2001-05-23 10:15 AM

Oh I know one

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

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