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2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

0 posted 2001-05-10 11:26 PM

Unsuspecting fly
A spider creeps up behind
Window glass between

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

1 posted 2001-05-10 11:29 PM

A great moment may we all be so fortunate!

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2001-05-11 05:33 PM

Cleverly done! I enjoyed this.

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-05-12 04:39 PM

Happy fly. Poor spider. Joyce

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

4 posted 2001-05-15 06:45 AM

wonderful haiku...you made this so real! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

5 posted 2001-05-15 07:57 AM

You spun a tragic tale of woe for the spider. This was great.

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

6 posted 2001-05-15 02:34 PM

Thanks for reading. This scene actually occured in the laundromat.
But, aren't we all protected from unsuspecting evil at one time or another.
Melton

Red_Feather
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

7 posted 2001-05-18 12:06 PM

Clever for sure, but i was pulling for the spider.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

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