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Hanson's Bridge (parts four and five) |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA ![]() |
Hanson's Bridge (part four...the river's song) i love to walk this wet asphalt road and kick at winter's few remaining clumps of brown and black snow; they explode exposing white insides then skate pirouetting in slow motion across the pavement through the sunlit vapor embedding themselves within the dripping skeletons of dead drifts; the faster the melt the louder the river's song will be and i can already hear its song calling me to Hanson's Bridge; it mingles with humming trees in the gentle wind; its song is embellished by birds excitedly chirping and fluttering their wings; and the leaves are back on branches again applauding the passing of winter; once more i am able to return the bridge to rest on its rail and watch the river flow like a cold crystal snake slithering endlessly beyond the horizon; i watch as it slips past the rich green and muddy brown meadow where wildflowers have sprayed a hint of colors yet to come; but mostly i just listen to the river's song hearing hidden in it your laughter from long ago and your whisper so warm and close that i can feel your lips against my ear; then as midday takes away the morning chill i peer down at the water and carelessly reach for the reflection of the sun shining brightly like a brilliant yellow daisy atop a crystal serpent Hanson's Bridge (part five.....awakening) sometimes i dream of places i've never been with strangers speaking foreign languages and doing foreign things i do not understand sometimes i dream in fast-forward pausing only to study the most curious of scenes even though they may distort my perceptions and endanger my heart sometimes i dream of driving in a thick fog with no brakes no headlights and a melting steering wheel that oozes between my fingers like a dali watch sometimes i dream of a river of wildflowers soundlessly racing by me beneath Hanson's Bridge; and then i awake to a warm soothing whisper that seems so real i can feel your lips against my ear [This message has been edited by Packratmike (01-11-2002 02:13 AM).] |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Packratmike, I really liked the first poem because of the strangely comforting feelings you gave. The second was too much like a nightmare I would not want to visit. Both are great, though, ME |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
ME...Did you ever wake up from a beautiful dream that was so vivid you had to question yourself whether it actually happened and when you realized it was just a dream you were crushed with disappointment? With "Hanson's Bridge" (parts 1-5) I tried to show some of the different ways dreams can comfort, as well as taunt, tease and even frighten us. In parts of it, I tried to put myself (and the reader) in that place where you aren't sure what is real. This is one piece that I'm sure I will be editing and re-editing for years to come. Glad you liked it and hope you saw the rest of it posted here. Thanks Mike |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Dreams can be very confusing, but you seem to know where you are going with it. Very interesting and well done. Joyce |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent writing, Mike! Well done! |
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