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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2002-01-09 06:49 PM

Is it a grey grey day over the earth?
or is it a grey grey cloud over my head?
Everything seems to lose its taste-
the blood is dark with pioson at my mind.

Where's the rainbow after the rain?
Children grow up just to strike their mothers' heart with their tongue.
Lovers kiss to dig one's heart a grave
to farewell him with a goodbye kiss.

Where's the direction of compass?
I feel like a lost child alone in rain.
Everybody is a single box-
outside is decoration;
inside is loneliness.

Where's the gifts that fill the boxes?
Are we all forgetful or shy?
Everyday passes by with the same routines,
it makes me tired, want to sleep.
And by sleeping does it end all
or it is some kind of horrify beginning?

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

Wikket
Member

since 2000-01-29

Posts 340
Santa Clara, CA USA

1 posted 2002-01-09 08:02 PM

aries_luv_ppl: Wow! This really pulled me in because it's how I feel most times. I have to tell myself sometimes, '...the world is not all bad; quit looking at the bad things and focus on seeing the good.'

Your poem emits a strong, focused intelligence...great!

~~Jamie

"...Two roads diverged in a wood, and I--took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference." --Robert Frost

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2002-01-12 07:13 PM

this is soft, delicate verse, hon.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2002-01-13 11:37 AM

We all experience those grey days. It makes us appreciate the sunny ones even more! Great expression, Aires!

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2002-01-13 02:30 PM

Gray days sometimes seem to last forever, but they do end and things do get better!

Betty Lou Hebert

Solstice Son
Member

since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

5 posted 2002-01-14 03:32 PM

Hmmmm....as I read, I wondered, and that alone shows how good this is

Sol

" The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? "

Leonard Nimoy

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

6 posted 2002-01-14 03:40 PM

oh ya, alone sometimes is good... but if you see a group of children playing under the light of a candle or Christmas tree, it may make you want to have a company.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

7 posted 2002-01-15 09:39 AM

touching and very insightful..good work here

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

8 posted 2002-01-16 02:31 PM

Never be afraid to reach for a dream. It's in the reaching we can look up and see the blue skies, and sometimes we can find the rainbow too.
I wish for you all happiness.

Hugs,
Deb

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

9 posted 2002-01-18 03:53 PM

aries, a gray day that goes on forever.....boy is that hard to live with. Say it can't be true! I know the feeling though. Deep, deep thoughts. Stiff upper lip and all that stuff, ME

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

10 posted 2002-01-19 05:14 AM

Deep dark thoughts. I like your ending. Good read

Melton

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