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RadikalGenetics
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since 2002-01-03

Posts 8

0 posted 2002-01-03 11:13 PM

I am terrified by this path I walk,
knowing that behind me eternity,
in front of me forever - the circle of time.

I have come to this point in the path,
the point I have come to many times before,
but today I stand here thinking about you.

You are in my past, this I know from the little
glimpses of the future.

And I know, that to be with you again,
I have to move forward,
to cross the barrier.

I want to be with you again,
in my past, where that moment of love
was forever.

I want to cross the threshold with you again,
because I still love your soul.

I am moving forward in time, to be
with you again in my past.
I need that moment of embrace with you,
that is the moment of everlast.

Copyright - Mark Hilton

[This message has been edited by RadikalGenetics (01-05-2002 12:05 AM).]

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

1 posted 2002-01-04 07:15 AM

Welcome to PIP. This a beautiful entrance. I love your thoughts.
the moment of everlast

Thanks,
Melton

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

2 posted 2002-01-04 10:30 AM

Time...such a difficult subject to write about! You've done a fine job though

Welcome to Passions!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

DJLI
Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 237
TN, USA

3 posted 2002-01-04 12:33 PM

You seem to sum up my own thoughts nicely. I know these feelings well. Great Write.

life is like a road: full of pot holes and dead ends.

RadikalGenetics
New Member

since 2002-01-03

Posts 8

4 posted 2002-01-04 06:10 PM

Thank you for the kind comments. I wrote this poem about a year ago. It was written 6 months after I perminently departed with my soul mate. It's about a Norwegian Princess who touched a mans soul with love, deeper than any other human being in all of my life, she left me because I would not accept christ as my lord and savior. I never loved another human being as much as I did her. She really broke my heart into pieces and a part of my soul died forever. But we have to move on otherwise our soul dies a little each day.

[This message has been edited by RadikalGenetics (01-05-2002 03:04 PM).]

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2002-01-04 09:00 PM

Welcome to Passions, RG! I could feel your pain in your words. Please check your email for a special welcome!

Lady Lost
Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

6 posted 2002-01-04 09:02 PM

this is absolutley beautiful. You remind me of someone I know... he too was hurt by a princess, but from his pain grew strength. He knows who he is now.. I dont think he would have figured it out if she hadn't left.

~b

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

7 posted 2002-01-04 11:52 PM

I'm sorry for the pain you have been through and hope the future is kinder to you. Welcome to Passions and hope you will enjoy your time here.

Betty Lou Hebert

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2002-01-05 07:17 AM

Mark, welcome to Passions! An enjoyable read, looking forward to more!

Lady Lost
Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

9 posted 2002-01-05 08:46 AM

I had to write another response because someone blew your cover and I think it's funny. I miss you marky mark... I am glad you are expressing yourself in here... your poetry is unreal.

~bethy poo

kelieth
Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

10 posted 2002-01-05 10:47 PM

Your poem speaks volumes as I enjoy it. Excellent write.

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

11 posted 2002-01-06 08:06 PM

First...Welcome and second, a great poem about time past and future and all in between. ..ME

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

12 posted 2002-01-06 08:21 PM

How romantically sad and beautifully written!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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