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My Roses

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2001-11-17 06:04 PM

I think this one is shallow but sweet. I wish someone would say that to me. hehe.

A walk in the spring
Bring me unto you.
Roses are your smiles;
Roses are your words;
Roses are your dance
As the petals fly with you.
And as your breath fills the air
With scents and sweetness
I ask for your hand.

hehe what do you think of it?

Lizzy http://poets2000.com/lizzyvivian/

~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
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Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

1 posted 2001-11-17 07:04 PM

Very tender! Someday, I hope someone does say this to you! You deserve it.

Betty Lou Hebert

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

2 posted 2001-11-17 07:17 PM

Now I won't say that is shallow.. I think it is very romantic..it is a good way of saying your heart's wishes.

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

3 posted 2001-11-18 08:04 PM

awww sweet

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.

[This message has been edited by Moon Dust (edited 11-18-2001).]

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2001-11-19 07:25 PM

Very sweet, Aries!

notarose
Junior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 21

5 posted 2001-11-20 07:24 PM

I love roses even though I am not one. Nicely expressed

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