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Solstice Son
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since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

0 posted 2001-10-31 04:29 PM

Pssssst!! Can you smell it?
There's something moving through the air
I'm not sure of its strange origin
but I can see it over there
just outside the corner of my eye
I see it lurking round
but I can smell it like its in my face
almost feel it by the pound
It could be worse I suppose
to know its certain form
maybe its a happy thing
though with that smell I bet forlorn
Perhaps I'll make a friend of it
that something over there
then again it might be nasty
aww shucks I just don't care
You wanna come with me to find it?
maybe it glows at night!
Let's stay out beneath the moon
and wait for it come mid-night!
Psst! I think I see it now..
think its walking up to me..
I've never seen its like before...
Oh wait!!...now I ......

" The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? "

Leonard Nimoy

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

1 posted 2001-10-31 05:43 PM

Spooky stuff...yikes!!

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2001-10-31 06:22 PM

Sure hope it didn't get you. We want to see you back here. Joyce

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

3 posted 2001-10-31 07:27 PM

Well done!

"Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling

"With his ONE EYE!!!"
The Green guy... with his ONE EYE! Ha!

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2001-11-01 01:09 AM

If it smells bad, maybe you don't want to find it!

Betty Lou Hebert

Solstice Son
Member

since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

5 posted 2001-11-01 08:12 AM

~ giggles madly to hisself ~ Thansk peeps...this was a bit of fun...strange...but hey we've copme to expect that now haven't we??? (( just nod and smile ))

Hopefully I'll remember to post the Squatch poems soon

Sol

" The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? "

Leonard Nimoy

Greeneyes617
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since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

6 posted 2001-11-01 11:18 PM

For some reason I started thinking of a skunk...LOL..

oh well.. Awesome job. I liked the form you put it in.

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

7 posted 2001-11-01 11:22 PM

Well down here it is chicken manure.. Cute poem.

Solstice Son
Member

since 2000-09-19

Posts 469

8 posted 2001-11-02 07:53 AM

Skunks and chickin poo....ahhhh.memories from me yute!!! (( and yes I know its youth *LOL* ))

Thanks for the comments

Sol

" The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? "

Leonard Nimoy

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

9 posted 2001-11-02 01:08 PM

perhaps its best left alone

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-11-09 07:12 PM

you know I really like this!

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"
also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

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