Corner Pub #2 |
adrift in darkness......(inspired by mistyrose's "this madness") |
Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
if i took you into this madness of my heart you would see things through my terror-filled eyes cast adrift in an indifferent city passion's taut screams taunt me each night from behind brick, stucco and drywall run child! save yourself from this madness and recapture your innocent life [This message has been edited by Packratmike (edited 05-19-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
*chilling* poem, Mike. Great companion piece for mistyrose's poem. |
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mistyrose Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 75state of anxiety |
packratmike...... gosh dont know what to say never inspired anyone before that i know of ...*blushing* good poem btw and thanks mistyrose~* |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Denise...thank you. Glad you liked this. mistyrose...thank you for the inspiration.*S* (I was hoping you wouldn't mind the dark path I took with this.) Mike |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A terrible thing. Some people do live with this. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
It's frightening to even think about people living in the city and on the streets. You certainly captured that scene well. Betty Lou Hebert |
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