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Waltz Of Autumn - Haiku

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-10-23 08:28 PM

Leaves cavort in Fall
dancing to a symphony
waltzing their farewell

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

1 posted 2001-10-23 09:31 PM

Ellie,
Beautiful expression of the celebration of Fall. Well done. Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2001-10-24 01:31 AM

Very pretty ellie!

Betty Lou Hebert

WRBreezin
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since 2001-08-04

Posts 212

3 posted 2001-10-24 10:41 AM

Absolutely lovely, greatly enjoyed!

Willie B

Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02

Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA

4 posted 2001-10-24 02:26 PM

Wonderful use of Haiku. Of all the forms of poetry that Ive learned, one of my favorites has to be the Haiku. Well done

"Never underestimate the power of idiots in larget groups."

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2001-10-25 06:04 PM

I think I commented elsewhere, but this is lovely. Joyce

BSC

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6 posted 2001-10-25 08:58 PM

I wish mine would farewell themselves into another yard Ellie ~ I'll think of this when I go out to rake and it will be a little less of a chore. So few words that beautifully describe so very much. Thanks... Bonnie

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

7 posted 2001-10-25 10:37 PM

Ellie, I love this! Wonderfully expressed

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-10-28 07:46 PM

Wonderfully written, Ellie!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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