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0 posted 2006-08-16 10:09 PM







The Muse

I saw her walking in the sun.
Her hair like gold, that's finely spun.
I thought her eyes would surely be
The color of the western sea,
But when we drew abreast, her glance,
Like purple pansies, did entrance!
We didn't speak, but in the air
Were clouds of words, just floating there.
All waiting for someone to see
They held a world of poetry!


Betty Lou Hebert

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1 posted 2006-08-17 01:28 AM


Oh, oh that must jhave been your muse.  How beautiful.  Love, joyce
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2 posted 2006-08-17 05:13 AM


so dear lady, you found your muse as well. How wonderful for you but I suspect she has been with you all along as you spin such fine poetry...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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3 posted 2006-08-17 12:09 PM


BettyLou~
Oh my gosh ... I adore that little muse of yours~
If she was 'missing' you sure found her with a *smile*~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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4 posted 2006-08-17 04:23 PM


Dear Joyce:  Thanks!  I hope I can hang on to her!

Love
Betty Lou

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5 posted 2006-08-17 04:24 PM


pegasus111:  Thank you for your kind thoughts!

Betty Lou

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6 posted 2006-08-17 04:25 PM


Dear Marge:  She does have a tendency to wander away!!

Love
Betty Lou

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7 posted 2006-08-19 06:34 AM


Dear Betty Lou

A wonderful poem!  It is very aMUSEing!  Eh! Eh!

Love Verbena xo


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8 posted 2006-08-20 12:43 PM


Dear Verbena:  So glad you enjoyed it and thanks for your amusing comments!!

Love
Betty Lou

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