I Write Masterpieces of Tragedy

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I Write Masterpieces of Tragedy

ballajosue
Junior Member

since 2006-06-04

Posts 45
Ca, Us

0 posted 2006-08-11 05:37 AM

Maybe I’ll never see her again
no one’s to blame
just this shame that i carry in my head
called my name
and that number that provides thunder
to make me feel game then later ashamed.

I wonder if anyone ever see’s the same
painting i do when i write these schemes.
It would be hard to believe.

If one day you happen to find my notebook,
you’ve found me.
You’d probably be more confused than
Christopher Columbus seemed.

I hate writing things other’s cant read,
as much as i hate having secrets unseen.

I never met a word i didn’t like until
Kirsten’s description was experienced.
Never feared a part of literature so much
a reality that one could not believe.

My lead keeps breaking; is it ever going to run out?
or does it just magically increase itself
because it likes to experience masterpieces of tragedy?
or is secretly telling me that I’ve said too much?
maybe it just likes to love itself.

Look at my arm’s lines and sparkle’s
you could probably figure it out.

Go ahead and connect-the-dots
and metaphors and any other things
that you think might be useful to connect,
its not what makes up my main thought.

Physically everything hurts
but that pain is buried under dirt
and my mind’s only shirt
is imprinted with the thought of her.
and what i did.
Just like i always do,
I went and messed things up again.

So many second chances
still i hope for one more
but somehow it always ends up
just like before.

I miss her.

-Josue Meza
www.truewordslie.com

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2006-08-11 03:39 PM

"I wonder if anyone ever see’s the same
painting i do when i write these schemes."
^^
love that and think the same of my own words...

try to stay out of the "messes"

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

2 posted 2006-08-12 11:53 AM

Hi Jo,

I like the flow of emotions in your writing, it feels natural, a little chaotic but that's how the complex human mind works

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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