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midnightblues
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0 posted 2006-06-10 02:05 PM


Will you write songs about me
Long after I leave
Will you remember me this way

How many times I've wished
I didn't do certain things
On good days I believed
The bad things weren't that bad
I struggled so hard to present a happy face
Determination has never been my forte
But I've honestly tried my best
Will you remember me this way
As the girl who lived like she was going to die

Yes many questions about my life will never be answered
But eternity is a mystery
Mystifying yet perplexing
Maybe the answer lies in casting aside doubts
And focusing on beliefs
But weak is my faith
And you probably can't see
The girl who is breaking down inside
Bewildered, lost, frantic
Searching for that little ounce of courage
To stand up once again
Maybe you won't
But remember me this way
The girl who lived to love

The facets of life offer painful lessons
At times I feel defeat
Once in a while I triumph
But it is comforting to know
That when the storm is over
I will see the rainbow that is meant for me
Prisms of hope that I hold so dear
Maybe one day... I will live again..

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

© Copyright 2006 MiCheLLe - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-06-10 02:26 PM


Michelle~
I have a special little soft spot in my heart for Michelle's ...~

'Searching for that little ounce of courage
To stand up once again'


You WILL stand ... for you have more than the 'little ounce of courage' ...~

A poignant heart-render dear poetess~

Thank you for the new photo !!!
You are just adorably gorgeous~
That smile could (and does) light up the room~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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2 posted 2006-06-10 06:08 PM


Oh I do love your picture and your poetry.  I am sure you are a song to someone already.  Love, joyce
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3 posted 2006-06-10 11:56 PM


Dear MiCheLle:  Your very poignant poem has touched my heart!  You are so special and someone is going to realize that and give you the life you crave! You are too courageous to not succeed in whatever you decide to do!

Love
Betty Lou

midnightblues
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4 posted 2006-06-11 12:43 PM


Thank you all!

Dear Marge you have always been kind, really sweet!

Joyce my friend, it is comforting to know that, thank you so much!

Oh Betty you flatter me, you have such a beautiful soul sister

Thank you once again dear sisters You always make me feel special when I needed it most..

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Lighthousebob
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5 posted 2006-06-12 12:39 PM


Michelle,


Your poetry exuberates with life!

-Bob

Jess
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6 posted 2006-06-12 10:09 PM


I havent read any of your other works, but after reading this, I'll be sure to watch for them. *ciao!*
midnightblues
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7 posted 2006-06-14 02:18 AM


Dear Bob & Jess,

Thank you both so much

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

pegasus111
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8 posted 2006-06-27 07:59 PM


Michelle....we write the songs here, with our words. do you not hear the melody? I hear yours..........

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



midnightblues
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9 posted 2006-07-02 09:13 AM


Hi Pegasus,

It is very comforting to know that
Thank you very much!

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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