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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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Drying Hearts ~~~ Incense bespoke without regret within a hasty reckless shower Entrusting hearts of love do split beneath a never blooming flower ~ Tears induced through heartless spieling strike the floor by anger lured Most resent their source of feeling and crucify with angry word ~ Venom drips from eyes tomorrow with deadly seeded thoughts today Roots entwining blot the sorrow but dry the hearts along the way ~~~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rex~ Such emotional depth in this piece~ Ponderous~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Just thoughtless anger and its consequences Thanks Marge  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well expressed, Rex! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very well done. Angry and thoughtless word can wring a poor heart dry. Joyce |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Well said, but its true. I breathe the dust, the dust is me. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
I never could resist the words of an irishman! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
to drop a letter with intent leaves this dying in venom spent Well done, Sir! |
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Shou-Lao Junior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 48 |
Enjoyed the read. The sign of a good poem for me is the ease in which it rolls off the tongue, this one rolled easily and several times. Shou-Lao |
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notarose Junior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 21 |
Venom drips from eyes tomorrow with deadly seeded thoughts today felt the anger in this one |
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