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Changing and transforming

Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

0 posted 2006-05-01 06:49 PM

I know you thought you had me down
But that was then and this is now
I can't believe who you turned out to be
I saw a side of you that I never have seen.

Changing - To be who you wanted to see
Changing - Loosing Myself
Changing - So that you would be pleased
Changing - But never facing the change.

I can not see what your putting me through
I gave to you all the love in my heart
All you could do was slowly tear it apart.

Changing - Walking blind in the night
Changing - Loosing Me
Changing - Holding on for the fight
Changing - But never facing the change.

Debo

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2006-05-01 10:44 PM

Very nice. Do you mean losing? Joyce

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

2 posted 2006-05-02 11:03 AM

I like your writing style

I'm confused though.. The ending.. Do you mean fighting to stay together or fighting for your freedom?

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

3 posted 2006-05-10 10:56 PM

Thanks Joyce and yes I meant losing.
And Thanks for the kind reply and to unconfuse you I mean fighting for us to be together. trying to hold on to him.

Debo

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