Lost words, and lost ships

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Lost words, and lost ships

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2006-03-25 02:10 PM

Too many days have gone by,
Without hearing your voice,
Searching for some relief, in this drought of silence,
My lover, where have you left me now?

This serene night seems to have been shaken violently,
Dreams unfurl in fury, desperation fed by anticipation,
Both of us now look within, searching for lost clues,
Missing answers, signs ignored, for this love cannot be lost,

As my eyes dart across the room, there hangs a painting,
Representing heaven and all that is good, with a silent stare,
Destination has brought this end, without any means of going back,
And all this I’ve lost with a tongue that burns brighter than the Sun.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2006-03-25 08:24 PM

Very powerful...

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

2 posted 2006-03-26 03:04 AM

Wow..

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

3 posted 2006-03-28 01:12 PM

nice read.. an emotion more powerful than love, I believe, is the initial despair of lost love.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Debo
Member

since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

4 posted 2006-04-18 11:20 PM

What a powerful poem.
When we realize it's over
Never getting it back it hurts.
Great write

Debo

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