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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Round The Tree Until I Melt too much clothes on too much skin, too much house to keep them in, too much head and too much ache, too much too many nights awake, too much phones and too much calls, too much eyes within the walls, too much wine and too much toasting, too much steak and hot dogs roasting, too much felt and too much feeling, too much friendly buzzards wheeling, too much true and too much fickle, too much ice and too much sickle, too much Walden, too much city, too much dog and too much kitty, too much first and too much last, too much coming, too much past, too much griping, too much gripping, too much buttons, too much zipping, too much work and too much fun, too much lunches on the run, I’m Sambo’s tiger; on I pelt, round the tree until I melt. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Me too, Ed...feels just like that!  |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Oh Ed, I think we all understand this one. Thank you, martyjo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I never got tired of your "too much"es  and I thought by the title the contents would be such... enjoyed the circling M |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
yeah ain't that the truth... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Yet not too much Ed! Fun read. Thanks for that and some memories.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
 Fun read! Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Too much of lots of good things! We all know this feeling!  ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Enjoyed this too much. Joyce |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
too much felt and too much feeling, too much friendly buzzards wheeling, If there's anyone who can't relate to this... I envy them their uncomplicated life! *S* This is wonderful! *S* Your rhyme has one thing in common with your free verse... it's flawless. *S* Excellent work! |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
What a wonderful little write I agree that that theres just to much Debo |
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