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Lovecolor -- inspired by IntoTheRain |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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"I don't know, that's just the last verse. It started here. When the rest is written, it's yours." Lovecolor Love colors us and sometimes it stains with the light we shine into each other. Like light it goes forever unless it crashes into some dark thing, or something that is gray too long for it to live. Hold on to red, to yellow because love may give the full rainbow, and if those colors form, after red of its beginning and the happy yellow days you may come into green then blue. Now it is all written, and it is, as promised, yours. [This message has been edited by Ratleader (02-25-2006 10:24 AM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed....This is beautiful! Can you post a link here to the poem that inspired you, please?  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yep, thank you! /pip/Forum39/HTML/003925.html#000005 ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
Hey now, that's pretty...and rockin'. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This one graduated pretty fast -- I've got notebooks with at least a hundred half-written poems in 'em....and by the time I write one, more kibbles and bits have come to take its place! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Hold on to red, to yellow because love may give the full rainbow, and if those colors form, after red of its beginning and the happy yellow days you may come into green then blue. I read this earlier today... but was dashing out the door and knew that any response I gave then couldn't possibly do this justice. *S* Now I'm home with plenty of time on my hands... and face the same problem. *S* I love this entire poem... but especially the promise of these last lines. *S* However long it takes your words to become complete and graduate from the notebooks... it's worth the wait. Beautiful work!!! *S* |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
'after red of its beginning and the happy yellow days you may come into green then blue.' Lovely  thanks for sharing. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So go uncover those half-written and let them fledge full of wing... |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
to cool green days, the warmth of sun,the peace of blue skies and an open heart to take it all in... ~ Karen ~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This one had a good start -- ITR's work is astonishingly good, for a guy of 22...or 32...or 42.... My "see-now-read-now" list has grown again! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Hi Ed, I enjoyed reading your wordplay It is beautiful Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
as intricate as love itself...which, I'm sure, is the point...nice read. welcome to the corner a bit belatedly. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ed~ You took a lovely word-thread and wove it beautifully~ Thank you for coming to the Pub~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Ratleader: Nice to see you posting here and this makes a grand entrance! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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IntoTheRain Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 51Westwood, CA |
that was excellent.. i really wanted to thank you as well, the feedback i got was really tremendous.. thanks! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I don't know where I was to miss this so long. It is lovely and I like your color theme. Joyce |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I shall keep all the colors. Green is for emerald fire, blue is for clear blue sky. I realize when love fails to bless, it isn't love. This is a beautiful word-paint. Thank you for the rainbow! |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is beautiful, Ed!  ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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