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FNG
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since 2006-02-07
Posts 477


0 posted 2006-02-21 04:37 AM


You took my heart for granted.
I should have known it eariler.

How foolish I am to give you all,
What's more precious than my heart and soul.
I gave them to you without being told.

It was a price too heavy,
for me to carry.
There wasn't any ending,
at the very beginning.

I promise my heart,
we'll never part,
for someone who doesn't fare.
And maybe who had never care.


© Copyright 2006 Danielle Tan - All Rights Reserved
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
1 posted 2006-02-22 09:18 AM


Dear FNG,

I like it that you express yourself with simple words, it makes the poem so much more special
Nice sad little poem, I can relate to the emotions..

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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