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Breathless |
desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
Breathless I look at her face She is the sun, My true and only one Her smile is the snake I am her prey to take Her aura is the light, silver fires burning bright Her eyes are the moon, and being with her will never be too soon Her love is the way, and what more can I say, Before her, in her presence I stand defenseless, naked and breathless |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gabe~ breathless indeed~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
thankya kindly. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
tis just beautiful ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Enjoyed your poem. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Hi Gabe, This is lovely, I love the imagery Thanks for sharing! Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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