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Kathy
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since 2006-02-10

Posts 153

0 posted 2006-02-10 03:25 AM

Far below the dog star's slumber,
far below the crab;
fell among the chrome cast shadows,
fell and lodged against night's brow.

Dripping
down that seamless stairway;
dripping
down upon the slabs
of sided pillows, dusted even
are the frozen castle trowels.

With love to all!

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

1 posted 2006-02-10 06:46 AM

Welcome. Nice writing, martyjo

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-02-10 07:45 AM

Kathy~
Sheer joy at reading this piece~

WELCOME to PiP~

So pleased that you decided to stop off at the Corner Pub for your entrance into this wonderful circle of poetic friends~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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ManOfWolves28
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since 2005-12-21

Posts 83

3 posted 2006-02-10 02:15 PM

Im thinking astrology and a bit of dreaming is what inspired this. I thought it was interesting. Though short it had good rhythem.

...If you choose not to decide you still have made a choice.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2006-02-10 03:12 PM

Kathy: I really like the title of this poem and the mystery it presents!

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2006-02-10 05:03 PM

Excellent first post Kathy!
Very much enjoyed.
Welcome to Passions!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Kathy
Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 153

6 posted 2006-02-10 10:37 PM

Thank You...everyone!

Hugs,
Kathy

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

7 posted 2006-02-11 10:53 AM

Hi Kathy,

Welcome to Passions! I love the imagery and hope to see more of your works

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

8 posted 2006-02-12 09:47 AM

Aha...I found you! Here's your official Welcome to Passions!!!

Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting!

desert-spike
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since 2006-02-01

Posts 194
TX/USA

9 posted 2006-02-14 06:33 AM

That was simply delightful. Appealing to both the imagination, as the senses.

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