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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
What do you do... when words turn your heart to ice? When memories of sweetest love are then tainted by cruel vice. She...she said she doesn't like it.. to kiss me anymore and never in my life have i felt so dead before My faults cause her anxiety that closes up her heart yet she the one in vile affair implores me often love to restart there's no one round for me to ask for advice to aid my soul so tween my heart and mind I wrestle wishing I could ' boldly go." to someplace where life makes sense where my faults don't hurt or pain the ones I love, and need love back like all life needs sweet rain tis been long since deep in sadness rhyming words I have confessed somehow here it does seem safer for my soul to be undressed When I write just from the keyboard not having taken time on paper to scribe I know in these dark ether fonts my soul in them does hide someday ...i hope it all makes sense forgive me these sad whines just had some thoughts all bound within needed freedom ...wrought in rhymes ~Which way did They go? How many of Them were there? I MUST find Them!! I AM THEIR LEADER!!~ Author Unknown..well at least to me..:) |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Your sad poetry is very touching and I hope it won't be long before you feel like writing happy verse. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Very touching poem and I'm sorry for your sorrow. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Awww Sol!!!  No worries kid!  We're all here for you and it's okay if you bare yourself for us, your soul is safe here!  ~~Jamie [This message has been edited by Wikket (edited 10-18-2001).] |
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