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Corner Pub #2

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IntoTheRain
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 51
Westwood, CA

0 posted 2006-02-02 01:23 AM

I felt hollow
Like the empty branches
Of the winter laden willow tree

Dreaming of the light
A beautiful dawn
With her eyes of fire

Waiting for the night
To masquerade as day
For broken arms to make it fade

Wrapped in a blind tomorrow
Trapped in the silence of my little life
The silence of our last goodbye

The memory, like shy love
Takes flight at the sound of voices
A lost song

A light blooms in the dark
My thoughts fade away
Like tears in the rain

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i dont like this yet.. i dont know, maybe the transitions just suck.. haha.. maybe others will enjoy it

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

1 posted 2006-02-02 11:38 AM

Hi Rob,

I enjoyed reading this

transitions can be an expression of your own style as well, in any case you know I adore your writing

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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